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In the future, nobody will buy printers newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It has always been argued that in
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 will not waste their money on newspaper books and printers as they would get everything from the internet without pay. I partially agree with
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 essay shall shed light upon my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs. Foremost, the fundamental reason behind my agreement is that e-books and free online news websites are proliferating continuously. I believe that within
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ten years ago nobody will pay for printed material,
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 in the academic field. Nowadays most individuals have electronic gadgets
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 as smartphones, Ipad, laptops and many more where
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 can use online platforms and learn easily everything.
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, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that these days 45% of
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 spend their time on social media to get news and any type of information it would have better influenced in
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further
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, they might face health ailments. The prominent problem
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introduces by the e-books and online news applications, it directly
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 on eyes as it emits blues raises, but if human beings read information from books and newspapers, they may make more interest in it.
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, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that almost 65% of the population have dissatisfied because with
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 commoners can suffer
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 technology.
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 social networking could
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 for each and every person as it provides unlimited information
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 an effortless way, there is
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 impact on health.
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