You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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In some nations, there is a common belief that having your own

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is better than renting it. I think that owning a

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gives security to your life,

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decision depends on the type of life each person has. Some people believe that having a

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is an investment which will give a lot of benefits in the future. Since renting a

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in my hometown cost 600 euros monthly,

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amount can be the monthly rate paid in order to buy a

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house

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will be yours 5-10 years later,

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a renting

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will be rich in benefits only for the renter.

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, asking a debt in order to buy a

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can be a great risk if, during the next years, the person loses his job or faces some economic difficulties. In these cases, losing houses and every other thing you own is highly probable. I personally know a family who opted for buying a huge wonderful villa in front of the lake of Garda where they would like to pass holidays.

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family was rich, they owned a well-known factory in Mantua.

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, after the crisis of 2009, they had to face many difficulties and their factory closed definitely in 2010. It was a dramatic situation for them.

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, I strongly believe that the choice of owning or renting a

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should be based on the economic situation. Renting a

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give

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more flexibility since if you can afford a

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600 euros, everyone can change and start looking for a cheaper

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, owning a

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can be the best option if you are in a stable financial situation because

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decision will add stability to your life.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

290 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

asset accumulation
equity
mortgage
tentative stability
real estate market
inheritance
social mobility
fiscal responsibility
down payment
appreciation
depreciation
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