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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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No one in the right mind can contest the argument that owning a house is better than renting it. I am inclined to believe that owning a place to live in is the most important part of
life
.
To begin
 with, I truly believe that buying a
property
 is the best investment, no matter which country you live in.
However
, it is more challenging to buy one in some countries like Iran as you need to pay the whole price in cash. In countries
such
 as
Canada
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 the economy is strong enough to provide loans for buyers.
Therefore
, one could purchase a
property
 with a small down payment and pay the rest of the amount as monthly instalments. Another paramount factor that needs to be considered is that rents tend to increase year after year and
this
 means stress and anxiety for
people
 who live in rented places. They have to cut out some expenses to meet the ends. Ultimately
the
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life
 quality decreases day by day and
thus
life
 dissatisfaction increases.
People
 feel more secure in their
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property
 as they do not have to deal with the aforementioned problems.
On the other hand
, buying a house or an apartment would be stressful for some
people
 as they cannot afford it. If we consider
this
 matter as an important aspect of
life
 for everyone, it takes away joy from some
people
’s
life
. They struggle all their
life
 to own a
property
 without enjoying a bit of it. On the basis of
aforementioned
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 reasons / reasons mentioned above, I am convinced that
people
 should invest their money in a
property
 if they can afford it rather than waste it on
rents
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rent
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.
However
, it is not applicable to everyone’s lifestyle.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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