The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph provides information about the changing
number
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of
travelers
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travellers
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who visited Caribbean islands in a seven-year span, measured in millions of
visitors
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.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the total
number
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of
visitors
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and
people
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who stayed on boats showed a positive trend,
while
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travelers
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travellers
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who chose to reside inside the island experienced the opposite. To commence with, the total comers and
people
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who opted to live
in
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on
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a cruise had an increasing trend. Starting at 1
million
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visitors
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, the total
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visitors
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number of visitors
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increased steadily before reaching around 2.7
million
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visitors
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and peaking at 3.5
million
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at the end
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of the period.
Furthermore
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, the
people
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who stayed
in
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on
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cruise ships
also
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showed an increased
number
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of
travelers
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travellers
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. Having stood at around 0.3
million
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, it rose marginally to 0.5
million
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before falling to 03
million
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and soaring to 2
million
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in 2017, 0.5
million
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higher than
visitors
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who stayed on the island.
However
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,
people
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who chose to stay on Caribbean islands had a decreased
number
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of
visitors
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.
Started
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at just above 5
million
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in 2010, it climbed to 1.5
million
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in 2013 and remained steady for the next following two years before falling to around 1.2
million
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and
increased
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marginally to 1.5
million
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visitors
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, people, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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