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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every five years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

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In some countries,
people
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 need to redo their driving
test
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 every five years. Some
people
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 argue that retaking
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test
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 is necessary as
people
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 will continue to learn and remember
about
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traffic
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rules
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 and regulations.
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, others stated that retaking the driving tests every certain time might be
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disadvantageous
disadvantages
 as
people
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 need to take permission from work or school on the task that they have already mastered. There are a few benefits of retaking the driving
test
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. First of all, it could be a method for drivers to learn and remember about
traffic
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rules
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 and regulations. By retaking
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test
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, we hope that all
people
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 will always obey
traffic
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rules
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,
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 reducing the number of
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 accidents.
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, ageing or diseases can cause a reduction in physical and mental functions.
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, it is advisable for
people
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 to renew their driving permits and retake driving tests every five years as it could prevent unfit drivers to have a driving licence.
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, the opponents state that redoing
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test
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 every five years or so could be a total waste of time. Many studies have suggested that
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 humans will never lose the physical ability that they have already mastered. These may include driving a car or playing a certain type of sport.
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, a patient suffering from amnesia will not lose his/her ability to drive if they have acquired
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 skill before.
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, in Indonesia
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, taking a driving
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 may take a whole day. Employees need to take a leave or get permission from their office or school for attending
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test
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.
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, it has economic and educational implications. In conclusion,
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 it may be true that retaking the driving
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 may cause economic loss, I believe that the benefits of redoing the
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 outweigh the drawbacks as
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 will be remained about
traffic
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rules
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 and
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, may help reduce road
traffic
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 accidents

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • retake
  • enhanced
  • mitigation
  • logistical challenges
  • financial burden
  • capabilities
  • independence
  • stress and anxiety
  • reinforcement
  • road rules
  • administrative
  • insurance premiums
  • decline
  • government agencies
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