Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and how can the problem be managed?
Our changing lifestyles have had a far-reaching effect on our health. Today, many young
children
are chronically overweight Use synonyms
as a result
. In Linking Words
this
essay, I will outline some Linking Words
causes
of childhood Use synonyms
obesity
and suggest ways the problem can be addressed. Use synonyms
While
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obesity
has several Use synonyms
causes
, poor diets and insufficient exercise appear to be key drivers of Use synonyms
this
serious disease. A move to a convenience Linking Words
food
diet both in schools and at home has resulted in many youngsters eating mostly nutrient-low foods, which are high in sugars and fats and low in fibre. Our bodies are unable to process these foods efficiently so fat accumulates until our body mass index is high enough for us to be diagnosed as obese. Exercise is well known to assist the body in getting rid of fat but the reality today for many Use synonyms
children
is that they take almost none. Spending more time sitting at school or on devices, and being driven everywhere in cars, it is difficult for many Use synonyms
children
to avoid becoming overweight. Use synonyms
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combination of a sedentary lifestyle and a junk Linking Words
food
diet is, indeed, a dangerous one. Challenging though Use synonyms
this
problem of childhood Linking Words
obesity
is, there is much that can be done to manage it. Addressing the two Use synonyms
causes
which I outlined above would be good but the matter may not be so simply overcome. Because the Use synonyms
causes
of Use synonyms
this
disease are deeply rooted and complex it would seem that a broad educational strategy could work well. Linking Words
This
would involve governments funding programs, in schools and in communities, which are designed to help young people and their parents to understand the Linking Words
causes
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obesity
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then
to assist them to make whatever changes are needed to deal with these. Linking Words
In addition
, governments would need to address the so-called Linking Words
food
deserts found in many urban areas within which healthy nutritious Use synonyms
food
is hard to obtain, the majority of Use synonyms
food
outlets being fast Use synonyms
food
restaurants and 7/11s. If parents struggle to buy good Use synonyms
food
, education is unlikely to have a Use synonyms
long term
impact on the health of their offspring. Add a hyphen
long-term
To conclude
, there is no doubt that it is crucial to deal with Linking Words
obesity
among young people. As it is often caused by poor diet and insufficient exercise, educating Use synonyms
children
and their parents about the importance of both, Use synonyms
as well as
ensuring healthy Linking Words
food
is available to all, will go a long way towards solving Use synonyms
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