Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the gorvernments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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scientific

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should be carried out and controlled by the authorities

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of private organizations. I totally disagree with

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statement because

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can make deplete the public budget , and if

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private

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run and

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Scientific

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can have a positive

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. To being with, there are several reasons why I believe the scientific program should

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and

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control

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by private organizations.

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, the governments have many responsibilities to

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illusrate

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illustrate

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carried

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out and

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control

scientific

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the

quailty

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quality

of infrastructure namely, education, healthcare,

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will decrease

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because the governments do not have sufficient money to spend

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infrastructure.

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, if the private

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run and

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can

leads

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make

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scientific

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more competitive.

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is because every company will compete in order

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they

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best company in

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field.

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,

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will work hard in order to find

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drug

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for cancer in order to gain

reputation

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a reputation

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to make profits, which

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can speed up the process of

discover

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druge

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drugs

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for many diseases.

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,

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can enhance the health of

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and increase the life expectancy.

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private

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carried

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out and controlled of scientific projects can attract

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foreign investors from worldwide.

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can provide jobs opportunity and income for local

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can

boosts

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the economy of

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,

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because the taxes from

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will increase.

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, I strongly believe private organizations should be carried out and

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scientific programs , because

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can make scientific programs more competitive and leads to

prosper

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economy country.