The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the changing
number
of visitors who entered Caribbean islands in a seven-year span, measured in millions of visitors. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is noticeable that the average total Linking Words
number
of comers and foreigners who opted to stay in boats had a positive trend throughout the year, Use synonyms
while
people who chose to reside on the island experienced the opposite.
To commence with, the total Linking Words
number
of foreigners who visited Caribbean islands and those who stayed on cruise ships had an increased trend. Starting at 1 Use synonyms
million
, the Use synonyms
number
of travellers rose gradually to around 2.7 Use synonyms
million
and remained stable until 2016 before peaking at 3.5 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the period. Linking Words
Furthermore
, people who chose to live on the boats had a quite similar pattern. Having stood at around 0.3 Linking Words
million
, the Use synonyms
number
of people slightly rose to 0.5 Use synonyms
million
before falling to about 0.3 Use synonyms
million
and steadily climbing until reaching 2 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the year.
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However
, guests that chose to reside on the islands showed a decreased pattern. Having accounted for approximately 0.7 Linking Words
million
, it inclined to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2013 and remained stable for the following two years before falling to around 1.3 Use synonyms
million
in 2016 and closing at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
, the lowest Use synonyms
number
of travellers in 2017.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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