The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides information about the changing
number
of visitors who entered Caribbean islands in a seven-year span, measured in millions of visitors.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the average total
number
of comers and foreigners who opted to stay in boats had a positive trend throughout the year,
while
people who chose to reside on the island experienced the opposite. To commence with, the total
number
of foreigners who visited Caribbean islands and those who stayed on cruise ships had an increased trend. Starting at 1
million
, the
number
of travellers rose gradually to around 2.7
million
and remained stable until 2016 before peaking at 3.5
million
at the end
of the period.
Furthermore
, people who chose to live on the boats had a quite similar pattern. Having stood at around 0.3
million
, the
number
of people slightly rose to 0.5
million
before falling to about 0.3
million
and steadily climbing until reaching 2
million
at the end
of the year.
However
, guests that chose to reside on the islands showed a decreased pattern. Having accounted for approximately 0.7
million
, it inclined to 1.5
million
in 2013 and remained stable for the following two years before falling to around 1.3
million
in 2016 and closing at 1.5
million
, the lowest
number
of travellers in 2017.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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