The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph gives information about how many
stores
appeared and closed in one nation during the period from 2011 to 2018.
It is clear that
the number of shops which closed and opened declined considerably within the observed period.
Besides
, a fluctuation was
also
witnessed by both of those figures. In the year 2011, the appearance of new shops took up the largest percentage, at 8500. Meanwhile, the sum of closed
stores
was over 6000. A year after that, there was a remarkable decrease to 4000
stores
opened,
whereas
the number of closed ones remained stable. From that year to 2015, the total of shop closures varied and
then
reach a low of under 1000 shops,
while
the figure for that of shop openings returned to its initial point in 2012,which stood at 4000.
However
, in 2018, more
stores
disappeared. The number of
stores
closed increased noticeably to over 5000.
In addition
, fewer
stores
were opened as the sum of those dropped significantly to 3000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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