Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is unpaid
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service. Now people are beginning to realize that unpaid
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service should be a mandatory part
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programmes. Personally, I tend to think that unpaid
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service must be part of high
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programmes.
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, it is well known that
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services,
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as working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children, become an essential part of our life. What I mean here is that these
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of works
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are refining team building, communication skills and so on. One of the main reasons behind
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people
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working in
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, all
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actions are done in conjunction, which are develop their communication skills with each other. A good case in point is volunteering on the coastline of the Caspian
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. In Aktau we have a lot of troubles with the Caspian
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,
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pollution, because people throw their rubbish,
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in the
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and
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our
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habitat exiting.
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, it can
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be argued that in high
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students
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must prepare
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their exams after
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and prepare their applications to the universities from the whole world.
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to say in the 11th and 12th classes
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attention
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saturating preparation for their subjects and they do not have enough time to,
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as things working for charity, and so on. Take
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students
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, I am studying in the JOO High
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and our
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, after their subject, stay to reinforce the lesson, until the
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closes.
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conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that one does not interfere with the other, and if
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want to do something good for society, they always
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find time for
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