IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6

Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #future #waste #time #moment
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, some people consider thinking about the
future
Use synonyms
 and planning for the
future
Use synonyms
 is
waste
Use synonyms
 of
time
Use synonyms
. And people should simply live in the moment,
Therefore
Linking Words
 i strongly disagree with the arugument.
Firstly
Linking Words
, lets talk about how important is thinking about the
future
Use synonyms
 and planning about it. To balance the life and achiving the goal there should be proper planning for the
future
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
:, a student want to become an doctor so its mean he is thinkng about his
future
Use synonyms
 but the steps he take to become a doctor is planning that's why thinking and planning about the
future
Use synonyms
 is not at all
waste
Use synonyms
 of
time
Use synonyms
.
secondly
Linking Words
, what's a
waste
Use synonyms
 of
time
Use synonyms
, if there is no planning the
future
Use synonyms
 is
waste
Use synonyms
 of
time
Use synonyms
 for me because there will be no clearity of life we will be suffring with what to do what not do next to clear ourself we should
plan
Use synonyms
 our
future
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
:, A housemaker
also
Linking Words
plan
Use synonyms
 for the
future
Use synonyms
 like how to save money for the
future
Use synonyms
. example -2:, A businessman plans about there
future
Use synonyms
 projects like within a year how many project he will take what will be the master
plan
Use synonyms
 that's known as
future
Use synonyms
 planning. At
last
Linking Words
, I came to conclusion that everyone should start thinking about the
future
Use synonyms
 and start planning for the
future
Use synonyms
 to secure his/her better life. there is no harm to
plan
Use synonyms
 anything for the
future
Use synonyms
.
while
Linking Words
 planning the
future
Use synonyms
 still anyone can live the moment.
Submitted by lizasingh1726 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: