You have recently finished a course and would like to give some feedback to the course organiser. Write a letter to the college where you took the course. In your letter explain what the course was say what you enjoyed about the course suggest how the course could be improved

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter about the Culinary Art and Design

course

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, which we finished

last

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week. Actually, the

course

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was an excited,

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, I was bored

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for

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the

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first couple of weeks but after

that

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I enjoyed the

course

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. The cooking and baking classes

was

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so amazing. And we got the chance to

met

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meet

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with the Master chief of India Talent 'Ramvir Singh'. Despite cooking

classes

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I loved the Painting lecture

especially

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and especially

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likes to play with different

colors

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colours

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during the painting time.

This

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course

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helped me a lot.

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before

this

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course

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, I found

difficult

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it difficult

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to cook my own food, now I can cook

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apply

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special dishes.

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, I started

invitie

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invite

inviting

my friends

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special dinners and they enjoy my food. Before I feel bored in my leisure time, but now I enjoy

to draw

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drawing

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the

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apply

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paintings and spent my quality time enjoyable. Excitedly, I sold one of my

paiting

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painting

paintings

and I got good money

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off

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it. Yours Sincerely, Tania

taniamall786Wed Jun 21 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

163 words

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