You have recently finished a course and would like to give some feedback to the course organiser. Write a letter to the college where you took the course. In your letter explain what the course was say what you enjoyed about the course suggest how the course could be improved
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter about the Culinary Art and Design course
, which we finished last
week.
Actually, the course
was an excited, Initially
, I was bored in
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for
a
first couple of weeks but after Correct article usage
the
that
I enjoyed the Add a comma
,that
course
. The cooking and baking classes was
so amazing. And we got the chance to Change the verb form
were
met
with the Master chief of India Talent 'Ramvir Singh'. Despite cooking Change the form of the verb
meet
classes
I loved the Painting lecture Add a comma
,classes
especially
likes to play with different Correct word choice
and especially
colors
during the painting time.
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colours
This
course
helped me a lot. Although
before this
course
, I found difficult
to cook my own food, now I can cook Correct pronoun usage
it difficult
the
special dishes. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, I started invitie
my friends Correct your spelling
invite
inviting
on
special dinners and they enjoy my food. Before I feel bored in my leisure time, but now I enjoy Change preposition
to
to draw
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drawing
the
paintings and spent my quality time enjoyable. Excitedly, I sold one of my Correct article usage
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paiting
and I got good money Correct your spelling
painting
paintings
of
it.
Yours Sincerely,
TaniaReplace the word
off
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