You have recently finished a course and would like to give some feedback to the course organiser. Write a letter to the college where you took the course. In your letter explain what the course was say what you enjoyed about the course suggest how the course could be improved

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter about the Culinary Art and Design
course
, which we finished
last
week. Actually, the
course
was an excited,
Initially
, I was bored
in
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first couple of weeks but after
that
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I enjoyed the
course
. The cooking and baking classes
was
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so amazing. And we got the chance to
met
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with the Master chief of India Talent 'Ramvir Singh'. Despite cooking
classes
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I loved the Painting lecture
especially
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likes to play with different
colors
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during the painting time.
This
course
helped me a lot.
Although
before
this
course
, I found
difficult
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to cook my own food, now I can cook
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special dishes.
Moreover
, I started
invitie
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invite
inviting
my friends
on
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special dinners and they enjoy my food. Before I feel bored in my leisure time, but now I enjoy
to draw
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the
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paintings and spent my quality time enjoyable. Excitedly, I sold one of my
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painting
paintings
and I got good money
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it. Yours Sincerely, Tania
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