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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart presents the population of Iceland between 1990 to 2020 differentiated by
age
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groups
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. Each
age
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group
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 is shown by a different bar
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. The difference is counted in
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per cent
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.
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, we see a steady increase in the largest
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population
 of the
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group
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 25-34 years.
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 the contrary, the children and
adulecence
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adolescence
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 are fewer for each year measured. Interestingly, the only
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 that has a more or less stable population rate, is the
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 65+. Even though the
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group
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 of young adults was the largest with about 30% in year 1990,
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 has had a
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overwhelming increase
 to about 50% in 2020 leaving a huge gap to the other
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groups
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. As for the oldest
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, it was a slight fluctuation between 12 and 15%, during the same 30-year period, ending with 14% in 2020. The other
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 had
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a negative trend, including the children
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, the
adulecence
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adolescence
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 and the
age
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group
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 between 55-64 years. Despite the decline, the
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group
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 was always the youngest
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all
 measured years.
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