The charts below show three types of police reports from the city of Johnstown in 2016, along with Johnstown’s average monthly temperature. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts below depict information about three types of police
reports
from Johnstown in 2016 and in addition
to that, it illustrates the average monthly temperature in town. Overall
, traffic
violations
are the biggest report throughout the period and the smallest one is theft
.
Firstly
, in Jan-Mar there were not a lot of theft
reports
(over 0), while
there were even fewer noise reports
. Traffic
violations
had the highest score in this
period, it was approximately 200. After that, traffic
violations
decreased a little bit, and in Oct-Dec it was over 150. Furthermore
, in July and September, the theft
reports
were at their highest( about 150). The noise reports
did not witness a lot of changes through the months.
Secondly
, the theft
reports
significantly grew in the warm season of July and August, whereas
the traffic
violations
declined and had their peak in the coolest season( Jan). Noice's complaints stayed almost the same in each of the seasons.Submitted by maat2074 on
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