The chart below shows the amount of area used for growing grains between 1990 and 2010 in a state in canada.
As an introduction, the bar chart demonstrates how the land was allocated for the purpose of cultivating grains in a particular state in Canada, from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the largest cultivated area of all fields in
all times was Change preposition
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while
the smallest was other lands. In addition
, plantations reduced significantly in the later stages compared to early years at
all places.
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Firstly
, grain cultivation area
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areas
field
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valley
and other planes between 1990 and 2000 were approximately similar in numbers at 60, around 40 and 5 respectively, Fix the agreement mistake
valleys
whereas
in 2010, the figures showed a slight decline by about 5, 14, and 2.5 from that of 2000, respectively.
When considering spring planes, number
of acres of land used for Change the article
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the number
plantation
was around 35 in 1990. Fix the agreement mistake
plantations
However
, this
figure went down by approximately 10 acres in 2000,
and remained relatively stable until 2010 at around 20.Remove the comma
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