Only rich people should donate to charity. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Donations have sorted out a portion of problems in today's world. Medical scientists doing research on scholarship to help aid society and give the folk quality of life by introducing new medicines to help cure deadly diseases. Today, a portion of critics believe charity should be done by the rich community solely

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, in my humble opinion, I believe everyone should have credit for it. Everybody should donate whatever they can afford. In

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modern age, we buy a lot of stuff which we might not need after a certain period of time.

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, tech gadgets get older once a new version is released into the market.

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, when a new laptop is released we try to grab the latest versions as it has many features

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giving the old device to the company for a much cheaper price which doesn'

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help us at all rather than doing

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we can give to a person who might have a need for

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, we throw away clothes when they don'

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fit us or have small holes in them

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of doing that we can donate these to thrift stores.

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, One in four cannot finish their food and put it in the garbage.

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, when they eat, they could use two plates in one

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the other is keep the food so they don'

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get contaminated and can be given to someone who hasn'

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eaten for the day.

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is a charitable work too which doesn'

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need money to be spent on.

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, charitable works need to be done by the rich societies as well. Their donations are crucial as we needed a lot of funding to make human life easier.

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with, wealthier families should come forward for hospitals, schools, and research centres.

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, during covid researchers looking for the vaccine needed money to buy components, do trials and so on.

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, people who live on minimum wage cannot put their hands on help as they were not working. At that time, Jeff Bezos donated half a billion to overcome the issues.

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, it is everyone's responsibility to help each other during their hard time and mitigate problems by cooperating rather than outing it on each other's shoulders.

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philanthropy
broader spectrum
mutual aid
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oversimplifies
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democratizing donations
online fundraising platforms
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