The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar charts compare
a
survey results of drinking habits in Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
last
4 weeks which are buying Correct article usage
the last
coffee
and tea buying in five differents
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different
city
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cities
of
Australia. Change preposition
in
Overall
, in the last
4 weeks, the survey result
state that most of the residents in Sydney, Correct subject-verb agreement
results
Melbourne
, Brisbane
, and Hobart prefer to went
to a cafe for drinking tea or Change the form of the verb
go
coffee
, following the remain
categories which are bought instant Replace the word
remaining
coffee
and bought fresh coffee
, respectively. Whereas
, it is the reverse for people
in Adelaide, which are love to bought
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buy
instand
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instant
coffee
, even tough
the difference is Correct your spelling
though
slightly
to Replace the adverb
slight
peoples
whose like to Fix the agreement mistake
people
went
to café.
In terms Wrong verb form
go
drinking
habits, went to a café mostly Change preposition
of drinking
diminati
by communities in Correct your spelling
dominated
Melbourne
and Hobart with the highest percentage among all which
about almost 65%, Correct pronoun usage
apply
following
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followed
with
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by
people
in Sydey
at a little over 60%, Correct your spelling
Sydney
Brisbane
at 55%, and the least is Adelaide at just 50% and almost have the same amount of people
who like to bought
instant Change the verb
buy
coffee
for about 50%. The next category which is bought instants
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instant
coffee
with Hobart’s people
have
the highest percentage to almost 50%, Change the verb form
has
following
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followed
with
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by
Brisbane
, Melbourne
, and Sydney at 53%, 49%, and 46%, respectively.
And the least favorable
habit category is Change the spelling
favourable
bought
fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
. Sydney have
the most enthusiast Change the verb form
has
which
about 44%, following the Correct pronoun usage
apply
others
city there are Correct quantifier usage
other
Melbourne
, Hobart, Adelaide, and Brisbane
at 43%, 38%, 34,5%, and 34%, respectively.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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