Some parents and teachers think that children's behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It has always been argued that a few

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of families and mentors consider that it is

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necessary

to control the

behaviour

of

children

,

whereas

opponents

children

need to behave freely. In my opinion, I favour the former perspective;

however

,

this

essay shall shed light upon both viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand,

Parents

are the primary teachers and home is the first school for the

children

where they learn to develop their personality and

children

can acquire moral values and ethics how to communicate in the

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society

with older ones and young people. If

parents

do that types

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in front of their

offsprings

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, obviously they follow their footpath.

For instance

, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that around the

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parents

have an essential role in teaching concepts of good and evil and moral values to their

children

.

Due to

the above-mentioned, I favour the same.

On the other hand

, a few individuals think that

children

have

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to show their

behaviour

in front of

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, whilst it puts an adverse impact on juvenile's life as nowadays,

children

spend

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most time digitalization

such

as they watch series and movies on online platforms and follow western culture, so they do not give respect to their near

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dear ones.

For example

, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that almost 45% of

children

have been influenced

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bad

behaviour

owing to technology.

To conclude

,

although

parents

have power train to their

children

regarding good

behaviour

as they spend more time together, I personally believe that

children

should depict their

behaviour

in the community, but it is

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thing because these days

children

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not ethnic values.