You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter : Congratulate him/her for also being accepted Ask him/her if she would like to be your roommate Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follow: Dear,

#friend #study #programme #paris #france #roommate #activities #two #addresses

Dear Alan, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you about our study abroad program in Paris. First of all, I was pleased to hear that we both got accepted to

this

program in France as I believe it is a life-changing opportunity.

Also

, I was wondering if you want to share a room with me

while

we will be studying. We know each other for a very long time, and I believe we will get along. Do you know what kind of activities Paris provides? I have never been to France, and, I think, neither have you. In our first month of studies, we can explore famous attractions in the historical

center

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. After that, I am planning to join a local guitar club as I have always been interested in learning how to play the guitar. Anyway, I really want to know what you think about the idea of living together

as well as

the activities you wish to participate in and the places you want to visit. Warmest regards, Nikita

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