People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that citizens living in capital cities have worse quality of life than people living in the countryside. I partially agree with

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statement. On the one hand, The huge popularity of facilities making people convenient, schools, shopping malls, and hospitals,

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, are in the town.

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, all ages of citizens can be more and more accessible to these facilities.

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, in many capital cities

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as Newyork, London and Tokyo, the population of elderly and handicapped is comfortable travelling everywhere ,especially in health care centre because their government play an important role in their mass transportation and landscape architecture.

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, parents allow their children to go to school by themselves because it is safe for their kids.

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, in the hustle and bustle of life, humans who settle in the urban get bombarded with numerous busy things

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as traffic jams.

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, many salarymen have to have breakfast in the car during they go to work,

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, they spend their's hurry life.

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reason, lots of early birds suffer from obesity because they eat fast food.

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, heavy traffic brings about an abundance of toxic gases which lead to respiratory disease,lung cancer, allergy and asthma,

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. To counter

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attack, a lot of urbanites choose to quit their job and migrate their family to rural areas.

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, they want to keep their family free of toxicity.

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, from my perspective,

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statement has more advantages than disadvantages. To overcome

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unbalance problem, the authority should prevent transportation from being centred at a mere location.

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People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Some people think that detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree?

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?