Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Many

children

are studying at

home

, taught by their

parents

, rather than going to

school

. From my

of

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viewpoint,

although

it could lead them to know their

interests

due to

private learning with their

parents

, they would lack

of

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an authentic friends

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. In the following paragraphs, the advantages and disadvantages of

home

-schooling will be discussed.

To begin

with, most

parents

prefer their

children

study

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at

home

because they live in a remote city, spending a long time

to

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school

. Sometimes, kids need to take exceed 2 transportations before arriving

the

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school

.

For example

, some of them have to take a train and

then

get on a bus to

school

which spend more than one hour.

As a result

,

parents

have chosen their kids to study at

home

as a

home

-schooling.

In addition

,

home

studied

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can lead them to learn based on their

interests

which is a really great benefit. To illustrate, if they like

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experiment

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and science,

then

their

parents

would plan the lesson,

matched

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their

interests

since the

school

teaches many subjects and

children

cannot choose, affecting them

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not know their

interests

or

favorite

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favourite

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subjects.

On the other hand

,

a

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home

-schooling

also

affects

children

in many aspects

such

as authentic society which means kids would not have friends in

a

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real life

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since they spend time only with their fathers, mothers and a laptop.

Consequently

, it could

affects

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them to be an introvert and

feeling

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afraid of being sociable.

Furthermore

, when they become an adult, they would feel that they do not have a child life, consisting of going to

school

, having lunch and playing sports with friends. To summarize, despite learning at

home

can benefits

children

to know what they are interested

, there

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are many drawbacks

such

as being an introvert and lacking

of

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society.

Therefore

, it can be emphasized that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.