the international community must act immidiately to ensure nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuel for e.g gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The global group should take
sudden
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action to make sure to
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countries
to
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decrease the ingest of fossil
fuel
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like oil and gas. I partially agree with
this
and will discuss some views
further
.
To begin
with, There are some major problems which are been caused by
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fossil fuels.
First,
issue
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is
of
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air pollution.
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, making citizens difficult to breathe
who
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a
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suffering
through
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some health issues.
Therefore
, it is hurting the environment
alot
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a lot
while
trees and animals are
also
getting hurt.
Although
it is generating income, there are several consequences.
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example a survey has been conducted it was observed that 65% of
peoples
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are not happy because of
polluted
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atmosphere.
On the other hand
, individuals who are at higher posts
dont
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don't
have any choice except
extracting
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oil and gas because it
also
helps in increasing the
GDP
. Until and unless the fuels
are draw
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out, we cannot help countries
GDP
. If the extraction of fossil fuel is stopped all the machines which
needs
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petrol will be stopped and electric vehicle cannot replace them cause
the
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can’t handle heavy weight.
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in DUBAI a lot of expenses
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cleared through the selling of petrol and increasing its
GDP
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GDP
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tourism
also
get
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a massive boost. In conclusion, based on the above argument, I would like to opine that government should set a limit for the day which will be beneficial for both
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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