It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?
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people
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people
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might be solved.
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their physical mobility is much higher than others.
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people
struggling with obesity to rise. Use synonyms
This
will be dangerous for individuals so it should be fixed. A way to fix that Linking Words
problem
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people
to do sports. Use synonyms
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the government should raise awareness. Linking Words
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people
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exercise
. The government can Use synonyms
use
some methods to fix that Use synonyms
problem
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such
as advertisements. If there were public announcements about the results of lack of Linking Words
exercise
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people
would imagine themselves as a person who acted in Use synonyms
this
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Then
they might tend to change their unhealthy lifestyle with a more exercised life. Another way to fix that Linking Words
problem
would be to encourage Use synonyms
people
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healthier transportation ways Use synonyms
for instance
biking or walking. If some advantages were given to Linking Words
people
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use
these transportation methods, others would prefer these too. Use synonyms
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people
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bikes and nowadays most Use synonyms
people
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use
them rather than cars.
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people
to be lazy. Use synonyms
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