The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following two pie charts

summarizes

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the marital condition of people living in

Canada

and

Australia

. These conditions included

seperation

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separation

, married, never

marrried

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married

, widowed, divorced, and

same sex

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marriage. The data is presented in percentages.

Over all

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Overall

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, it is

noticable

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noticeable

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that the majority in

canada

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Canada

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are

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not in a divorce but are living

seperately

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separately

While

almost half the population

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Australia

are married. Beginning with

Canada

, The highest proportion which is 53%, is for

seperated

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separated

but not divorced couples.

While

the second most proportion accounted for married

couple

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couples

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with 29%.

Remaining

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The remaining

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status

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statuses

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' were small in comparison to others, ranging from 1-7%. As for

Australia

, The highest value is for

seperated

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separated

couples with 41%.

Second

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most common is for married couples with 46%. Other categories presented low percentages in comparison to others ranging from 2-6%.

Which

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similar

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a similar

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finding

with

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canada's

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Canada's

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data. Both countries show

highest

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the highest

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marital status in

sepertaion

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separation

and marriage.

However

Australia

does not have

same sex

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same-sex

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marriage.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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2Word repetition
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23Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

159 words

6.50

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

marital status
population
pie charts
percentage
categories
Married
Single
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Widowed
distribution
noticeable trends
comparison
significantly different
similarities
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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many people work long long hours, leaving very little for leisure activities.

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