The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following two pie charts

summarizes

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the marital condition of people living in

Canada

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and

Australia

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. These conditions included

seperation

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separation

, married, never

marrried

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married

, widowed, divorced, and

same sex

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marriage. The data is presented in percentages.

Over all

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, it is

noticable

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noticeable

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that the majority in

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canada

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Canada

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are

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not in a divorce but are living

seperately

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separately

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almost half the population

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Australia

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are married. Beginning with

Canada

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, The highest proportion which is 53%, is for

seperated

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separated

but not divorced couples.

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the second most proportion accounted for married

couple

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couples

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with 29%.

Remaining

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The remaining

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status

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' were small in comparison to others, ranging from 1-7%. As for

Australia

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, The highest value is for

seperated

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separated

couples with 41%.

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most common is for married couples with 46%. Other categories presented low percentages in comparison to others ranging from 2-6%.

Which

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similar

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a similar

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finding

with

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canada's

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Canada's

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data. Both countries show

highest

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the highest

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marital status in

sepertaion

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separation

and marriage.

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Australia

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does not have

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marriage.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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2
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

marital status
population
pie charts
percentage
categories
Married
Single
Divorced
Widowed
distribution
noticeable trends
comparison
significantly different
similarities
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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You are invited to a party, however, because of some reasons you didn’t attend. Write a letter to the friend who invites you: (1) explain the reason why you didn’t go; (2) express your apology; (3) ask about some details in the party.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the country side is decreasing.

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development s other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?