You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

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Dear Sir or Madam, I have seen the advert that your hotel Sunbeam is looking for a part-time chef during the peak hours for

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summer only. I would like to apply for

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job as I have experience

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working as a junior chef in one of the hotels in Malaysia.

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, can you please tell me in detail what type of work you are looking for

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I can help in cooking different food types especially, Italian and Indian cuisine. I have 2 years of experience in cooking.

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, If you want a person who only has to wash the dishes

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, I am not the suitable person for that.

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, I would like to know how much you will pay me for working as a cook and what are the working hours.

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that, I have a small request that I cannot work for late nights as I have a family so I have to go home by 9'o

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in the evening. I hope you take

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into account. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

shikha_dhingraFri Sep 30 2022

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task achievement

Try to elaborate a bit more on your experience and skills to make your application stronger.

coherence cohesion

It would be beneficial to organize your paragraphs a bit more clearly. For example, separate your questions about the type of work and working conditions for better clarity.

task achievement

You have addressed all parts of the task and provided a courteous tone throughout the letter.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, maintaining a polite and formal tone suitable for a job application.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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You have seen an advertisement for part-time work in a hotel for three months over the summer. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions

A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree with this following statement?

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

1.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details •say about your salary package

Question- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Rich countries are getting richer while poorer countries are getting poorer. What is the cause of this? What could be done to solve this problem?