Some people think competitive sport is important for a child's education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opiniion

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Sports
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and physical activities are essential to humans of different ages. Some people believe that playing
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competitions is very important for children.
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others have different opinions and say they have negative drawbacks. My view is
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games
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are very crucial for children's lives.
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, playing physical competition can improve their ability to control emotions.
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the sense of winning will bring happiness and of course, they will learn how to be happy and overwhelmed with joy in a modern and ethical way.
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, if they lose youngsters can take a chance to taste the bitterness of loss and how to control that. Kids when they play basketball,football or tennis
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,
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, either win, lose or get an equal score.
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activities can develop their personality in the future life by discovering their ability, and limitations
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that their weak points.
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, young football players train four times a month to be able to complete the whole match. Part of some nations have different thoughts
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it's just
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they said they have a negative impact on youth. First of all, people think
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may be a waste of time and focusing on studying may be better.
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the importance of knowledge nowadays parents hope that their children finish school and college with high marks so they believe playing
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have no benefits.training every week, participating in competition locally or abroad may take a lot of time
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, despite different talk about
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subject I believe participating in different competition have a major role in the development of the youngest.
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, some people agree with me and some disagree and opine the whole idea of participating in
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activities.
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