The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart gives us information about the number of London Museums’
visitors
between 2007 to 2012. Overall
, in 2007 the Victoria and Albert Museum
came on top, followed by British Museum
and National Gallery respectively. However
, the National Gallery surged past the others in 2012.
In 2007, The Victoria and Albert Museum
had approximately 14 million
people coming, which remained constant for the following year. Surprisingly, the number fell to 9 million
in just one year,
and eventually reached its lowest point of 7 Remove the comma
apply
million
in 2010. The tourist growth gradually increased that
in 2012, 10 Correct word choice
and
million
visitors
came.
The situation is quite similar to British Museum
. The annual visitors
fell twofold in 2008, with just above 5 million
. For the following years, they saw a significant upward trend. By the end of 2012, the number of people paying a visit to the Museum
had risen from 7 million
in 2010 to 12 million
.
By contrast
, National Gallery never experienced a decrease. They started with 6 million
visitors
in 2007,
and kept growing over the course of the next five years. They succeeded in attracting more people, they had a 4 Remove the comma
apply
million
increase from 2008 to 2011. By the end of the period years, they reached 16 million
annual visitors
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