The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar chart gives us information about the number of London Museums’
visitors
between 2007 to 2012. Use synonyms
Overall
, in 2007 the Victoria and Albert Linking Words
Museum
came on top, followed by British Use synonyms
Museum
and National Gallery respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the National Gallery surged past the others in 2012.
In 2007, The Victoria and Albert Linking Words
Museum
had approximately 14 Use synonyms
million
people coming, which remained constant for the following year. Surprisingly, the number fell to 9 Use synonyms
million
in just one yearUse synonyms
,
and eventually reached its lowest point of 7 Remove the comma
apply
million
in 2010. The tourist growth gradually increased Use synonyms
that
in 2012, 10 Correct word choice
and
million
Use synonyms
visitors
came.
The situation is quite similar to British Use synonyms
Museum
. The annual Use synonyms
visitors
fell twofold in 2008, with just above 5 Use synonyms
million
. For the following years, they saw a significant upward trend. By the end of 2012, the number of people paying a visit to the Use synonyms
Museum
had risen from 7 Use synonyms
million
in 2010 to 12 Use synonyms
million
.
Use synonyms
By contrast
, National Gallery never experienced a decrease. They started with 6 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
visitors
in 2007Use synonyms
,
and kept growing over the course of the next five years. They succeeded in attracting more people, they had a 4 Remove the comma
apply
million
increase from 2008 to 2011. By the end of the period years, they reached 16 Use synonyms
million
annual Use synonyms
visitors
.Use synonyms
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