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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

#students #attention #school
distraction, reduce the quality of
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iran
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-cellphone,
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the detrimental
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 effect of
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 of phone stay a long
time
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class
, tend to reduce the attention in
class
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-1.5 hours,
autjoriteis
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authorities
shoud
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should
 reduce the amount of
time
 In the contemporary world,
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 on one
a
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particular subject is extremely hard
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 for
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youngsters and
students
. Today, numerous pupils face
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lots of difficulties to concentrate at
school
. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the reason and provide solutions. One of the main
reason
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 for
concentration
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the concentration
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 of pupils is distraction, in the fast-paced world, technologies provide lots of
entertainments
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, which can be really hard to resist for the
students
 to put away all of those humorous and entertaining activities.
An excessive
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use
 of cell-phone could have a negative impact on the student’s scores.In the other word, those pupils who are fully focused and listening to the
teacher
 are more likely to get higher marks
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than
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 those
students
 who are distracted by their cell-phone. To tackle the issue, the people who are in charge
in
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 the
school
 must put in place some
regulation
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regulations
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 for the
students
 who
use
 their cell-phone during the session and it must be forbidden to
use
it
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them
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 in
the
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class
.
Secondly
, long hours of studying can destroy
student’s
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students’
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 concentration. it leads to reduce the pupil’s attention.
Therefore
, the
teacher
 should
wary
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be wary
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 about the
time
 limitation in the
class
.
For instance
, In Iran,
an
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 average
time
 for each session in the
school
 is one hour and
half
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 which is quite a lot. it not only
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 student’s
concentrate
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concentration
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 but
also
 it is hard for the
teacher
 to teach a particular subject to
students
.
Pomodore
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Pomodoro
 technique provides a way to reduce the amount of
time
 to 25 minutes in order to increase concentration in the
class
. In
this
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 both
students
 and
teacher
 are less likely to get distracted and they more focus during the
class
. In conclusion, the people who are in charge
in
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school
 should
use
 the most recent techniques to overcome the obstacles
such
 as distractions and
students
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burn out
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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