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The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015

The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015
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The line graph gives information about the worldwide fibre need namely
polyester
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, cotton, cellulosic, and
wool
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 from 1980 to 2015 and it is measured by
million
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 tons.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the demand for all fibres except
wool
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.
Although
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polyester
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 showed a significant increase among the other fibres, cellulosic and
wool
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 followed the same pattern. In 1980, the demand for textiles was dominated by
wool
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 which was twice that of other types of fibres.
Moreover
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, the number of
wool
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 grew steadily and reached the same amount as
polyester
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 in 1995 at 20
million
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 tons.
On the other hand
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,
polyester
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 grew rapidly and recorded its peak at 70
million
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 tons, which was more than tenth-times its original number in 1980.
Besides
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 that, though cellulosic slightly increased between 1980 and 2015, from 3
million
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 to 10
million
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, cotton declined and reached the bottom in 2015.
In addition
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, the demand for
wool
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 was less than half from its peak in 1998.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words polyester, wool, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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