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Some people trust in their first impression about person's character because they believe their judgements are generally correct. Other do not judge a person's character quickly. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitudes do you agree with? Why?

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Belief is one of the most important factors that play a significant role in each individual life. A certain group of community predicts the behaviour and
personality
 of a human in the
first
 interaction. Another, group of modernists, prefer to
first
 understand the new
people
 they meet and
then
judge
 their character. In these looming paragraphs, I will discuss both views and beliefs of a person who
first
 prefers to understand other
people
 not just
judge
 them. In
this
 ,era it is very difficult to know who is playing mind games with us, society are nowadays very selfish that we cannot easily trust them,
that
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and that
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 is the major reason why some
people
judge
 any individual's
personality
 on the
first
meet
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meeting
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.
Whereas
 there is still a probability of getting wrong about any individual, there might be a person who has met you in some difficult situation where you may get wrong in predicting the character.
Therefore
, another group of communities prefer to do friends with the new individual and
then
 slowly take their actions
according to
 their behaviour. I believe, that in
this
 crowded
world
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people
 are alone, and they do not have genuine friends who actually believe in true friendship, so anyone who is connecting with any random individuals in their life does not just
judge
 the
personality
 of a human,
first
 give some time to understand them,
then
 at some point of the time predict which human is good for friendship or not. In a nutshell, each aspect has its pros and cons.
Although
 it is significantly important not to trust any individual on
first
 impression and understand their
personality
, I believe that in
this
 crowded ,world there are an immense number of good
people
, it is just a matter of situation how we meet them, so
first
 we should spend some days to understand any individual,
then
judge
 their character.
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