Nowadays, people can live and work anywhere they want because of the development of communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, through improved communication
technology
and transport, people can live and work
anywhere they want. In my opinion, I believe that it is true because it might bring more advantages than its disadvantages.
Work
from home or Wrong verb form
Working
work
from anywhere is Wrong verb form
working
favorable
among the youngerChange the spelling
favourable
,
Remove the comma
apply
because
not only Correct pronoun usage
ones because
giving
a better Wrong verb form
gives
work life
balance for workers but Add a hyphen
work-life
also
increasing
Wrong verb form
increases
local’s
economy where they lived. Correct article usage
the local’s
For instance
, I am Singaporean and have a current job in Singapore but I live in Bali because the living cost is cheaper than in Singapore. Moreover
, I enjoy living in Bali and spend a lot of money on local because I receive more wages in Singapore than in Indonesia. Hence
, it will also
bring benefit
and new opportunities for developing countries.
Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
On the other hand
, technology
was not advance
enough in some countries or some areas. That condition made people hard to get Change the form of the verb
advanced
a
reliable communication. Remove the article
apply
For example
, if we are
live in Papua, where that area is not covered byUnnecessary verb
apply
4
G internet connection, Correct article usage
a 4
therefore
any video conference will be delayed. Moreover
, some areas had not a
public transportation and were difficult to be livedRemove the article
apply
.
Change preposition
in.
Thus
, not all area was good for worker
who depend a lot on certain Add an article
a worker
the worker
technology
and transport.
To conclude
, although
some areas had limited technology
and transportation, living and working anywhere will push local communities to improve their economy and attract more tourist
who Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
willing
to Add a missing verb
are willing
working
from anywhere. Meanwhile, the workers have Change the form of the verb
work
a
freedom to choose the place where they Correct article usage
the
interested
Add a missing verb
are interested
in
and enjoy their lives.Change preposition
apply
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