Nowadays, the topic of many citizens are
organizedWrong verb form
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to travel to rural
areaFix the agreement mistake
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, which has been a prevalent topic. And there are many
people
argueCorrect pronoun usage
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that
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the
affectReplace the word
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ofChange preposition
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local individuals and the environment are benefits or drawbacks. In my perspective,
although
this
kind of activity has
certainAdd an article
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degree of weaknesses, the profits
are outweighChange the verb form
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the drawbacks.
It has been
suggestChange the verb form
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that the
people
who come from endemic
areaFix the agreement mistake
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will affect the natural environment and
producingWrong verb form
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pollution. For
instantAdd an article
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, there are many visitors through rubbish
in Change preposition
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anywhere and painting on buildings which is
placeAdd an article
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of interest
due to
the historical constructions
are Unnecessary verb
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damaged. After that, the street and famous scenery will probably become
certainChange the adjective
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crowded, when a large
amountChange the quantifier
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of individuals enter
to Change preposition
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remote
places
.
Lastly
, the
itemsChange noun form
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priceFix the agreement mistake
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will
increase
sharply
due to
many visitors
comeWrong verb form
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to rural
places
, and the high price of goods will affect local
people
severeChange the adjective
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.
However
, the benefits of tours visiting remote
areaFix the agreement mistake
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are very obvious.
This
situation can help rural
places
to develop
marketCorrect article usage
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economy and to promote the average standard of consumption, which is profit for state government and
economyReplace the word
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improvement.
Besides
,
this
phenomenon can
increase
the focus of the local place of interest and make the
places
become hot and popular,
hence
getWrong verb form
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huge
profitFix the agreement mistake
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from
ticketsChange the noun form
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consumption,
souvenirsChange the noun form
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consumption and so on. A typical example is that
,Remove the comma
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local citizens can use the reputation of famous
places
to
saleReplace the word
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goods to get big profit
withChange preposition
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low cost.
Lastly
, local
people
can claim everyone should try
themCorrect pronoun usage
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best to protect the natural environments and artificial buildings on the internet
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when many visitors play in these
places
. It is a useful method to protect the natural scenery.
In conclusion, I believe the positive effects of
people
visiting rural
places
is Unnecessary verb
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outweigh the drawbacks, it not only
improveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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the Correct article usage
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economy developing but
also
protectCorrect subject-verb agreement
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natural landscapes
onChange preposition
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certainAdd an article
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degree.
The line chart compares the percentage
peopleChange preposition
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who are 65
years
old or more in
Japan
,
and the
USA
over a period of 100
years
.
It is clear that
the ratio of elderly
people
increaseChange the verb form
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in every
countriesChange to a singular noun
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over the period shown.
Japan
is expected to see the most dramatic rise in its elderly population.
In 1940, 9% of Americans were over 65
years
old, which is higher than
otherCorrect article usage
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two countries. Elder
people
continuously went up in the next
years
from the
USA
and Sweden and reached around 15% in 1990.
By contrast
,
Japan
’s proportion
accountWrong verb form
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for 3% and was the lowest amount at that time. The number of
JapanReplace the word
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began to rise constantly between 1990 and 2010.
Between 2030 to 2040, a sharp
increase
in the percentage of
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older in
Japan
is expected to see, jumping around 15% to 28% by 2040.
However
, the ratio of elderly citizens in the
and the
USA
rise slightly in that time. By 2040, the figure for Sweden and the
USA
would be 25% and 23% respectively, which are slightly lower than that of
Japan
.