You want to apply to a private college seeking admission for a bachelor degree. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment and can not get admitted to the college without some help. Write a letter to the Principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Last

Sunday on the 13th of

this

month; I bought a white shirt from your online store in Toronto, Ontario.

In addition

to that, I bought khaki green shorts and a pair of white socks. I bought those clothes without hesitation because I have trust in your fabrics and items.

However

, I had a problem with them. I was surprised to discover that the white shirt had a missing button on the bottom, the size of the shorts was not what I have ordered and the socks were of two different sizes.

although

I have never had

this

issue with you before, I am really disappointed. And I am asking you to fix

this

issue. It would be fine with me if I was not in need of those clothes. I and my family will travel out of the country

this

weekend and I have bought

this

outfit so I can wear it when I go to the beach. without them, I will have nothing comfortable to wear on my vacation. I am looking forward to your solution. Yours faithfully, John Walker.

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