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Dear Sir or Madam,

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Sunday on the 13th of

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month; I bought a white shirt from your online store in Toronto, Ontario.

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to that, I bought khaki green shorts and a pair of white socks. I bought those clothes without hesitation because I have trust in your fabrics and items.

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, I had a problem with them. I was surprised to discover that the white shirt had a missing button on the bottom, the size of the shorts was not what I have ordered and the socks were of two different sizes.

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I have never had

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issue with you before, I am really disappointed. And I am asking you to fix

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issue. It would be fine with me if I was not in need of those clothes. I and my family will travel out of the country

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weekend and I have bought

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outfit so I can wear it when I go to the beach. without them, I will have nothing comfortable to wear on my vacation. I am looking forward to your solution. Yours faithfully, John Walker.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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