The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of producing five different types of tea from tea leaves.
The diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of producing five different types of
tea
from tea
leaves.
Overall
, the procedure for making contains three to five stages, commencing with growing tea
and culminating in drying the leaves.
The first three stages are the same for making five tea
types. In the initial step, the tea
is grown and harvested before being left to wit or wither. To produce white tea
, the leaves are simply dried in an oven
while
green tea
has to undergo a steaming and rolling process before oven
drying. However
, in the production of oolong tea
, the wilted leaves are rolled and fermented slightly before oven
drying without being steamed.
In contrast
, large and small-leaf black tea
has to undergo further
steps. After being rolled, the large-leaf black tea
was fully fermented and then
dried. The production of small-leaf black tea
was similar, apart from it being crushed, not rolled. Both of these tea
are finally
dried in an oven
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