Some people think that advertising on TV is useless and others disagree.Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely argued that television

ads

are not crucial for our life,

while

others believe that advertisements can affect

well

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us well

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.In my view,marketing ,TVs and

also

humanity can take numerous benefits from advertising.

This

essay will discuss

firstly

effectless

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the effectless

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side of

TV

ads

,

secondly

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and secondly

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upsides

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the upsides

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about

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of

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this

trend. On the one hand,the vast majority of people tend to purchase what they really want.By

this

I mean,watching

ads

and buying something through them are beyond

intend

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.

Thus

they can not see that advertisements will become useful way ,

instead

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,instead

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it

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they

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would be pointless concepts or just for

joys

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joy

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.

Moreover

,some malls are afraid of bringing new

production

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products

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which

are

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is

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shown

through

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on

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TV

or radio.Since nowadays unbelief about advert promises and importance in real life are emerging in individuals'

mind

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minds

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.

For example

,a number of  companies

where

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that

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make beverages show fascinating

appearences

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appearances

appearance

and promise a healthy production but after buying,consumers can recognise that they are not the same as

ads

.Through

this

,people are losing both their money and belief.

On the other hand

,I,

however

,support the second opinion,namely

that is

about

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the benefitial

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benefitial

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beneficial

ways of adverts.When people can not choose up-to-date and suitable clothes or want to find out popular things

accross

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across

the globe,

TV

ads

are by far the

most handy

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handiest

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helper because some things can aid their

hesistation

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hesitation

.Thanks to a number of

productions

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production

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ads

on

TV

,it is planned menus of needs in advance,

consumers

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and consumers

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find anything

easilyand

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easily and

also

purchase them in

market's

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the market's

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sections.Take hosts as an example.If hosts have no time to choose items for guests

whose

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who

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are in a hurry,just go and purchase from

supermarket

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the supermarket

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what

it

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apply

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is watched

by

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on

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TV

..

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.

...

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As a result

,they manage to achieve  time and finance

managements

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management

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. In conclusion,though there are some

drawbackssuch

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drawbacks such

draw backs such

as

advertisements

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advertisement

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types that provide unbelief and can not do their own promises,some

TV

ads

can emerge saving time and money.