The pie charts below Show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen islands, according to a surrey of visitors.

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and advantages of Bowen Islands,

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tourists.

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of tourists high cost of

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entertainment making up 25% survey of visitors.

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, two pie of disadvantages which are called food quality and weather make up 10% and 15% respectively.

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advantages sides travelling anywhere.People and scenery

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for 35% and 12% of all.

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The pie charts below Show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen islands, according to a surrey of visitors.

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.

Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

Some people think that famous people's support towards International aid organisations draws attention to problems, while others think that celebrities make the problem less important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Question. Happiness is considered very important in life,why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge and experiences.