Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Advertising is everywhere. In the modern era, it has taken an altogether new form. The ads have gone digital. The content

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had a major transformation.

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, the way these are presented sometimes is immoral and intolerable to society. Advertising has a great influence on

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. There are a lot of ads involving

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which represent the usage of

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, but

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may interpret them in the wrong way.

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, an ad showing a boy using tablets to study can influence kids for it to be a toy and use it for playing games, which is not right.

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in turn can make

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stubborn if parents do not buy it for them. Advertisers should limit the promotion of the

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. Only kid’s friendly

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which are of use

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should be showcased by

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. Another aspect of unacceptable advertising is the advertisement of tobacco by famous personalities. People admire and gets influenced by famous personalities like actors, politician etc. When film stars or politicians advertise tobacco or alcohol, true followers can sometimes start following them blindly without considering their harmful effects, which is very wrong.

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in turn has a negative effect on their health.

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, youngsters start copying their favourite film stars. And if they start consuming tobacco, it will affect the nation’s future generations in a wrong way. And

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some regulations should be applied to

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advertisements. In conclusion, the content of advertisements should be regulated by some critic body so that it should not cause any harm to society. It cannot be totally blocked but can be regulated because advertisement is the heart of marketing

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to consumers.

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, some steps should be taken by the government towards

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issue.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Your opinion

Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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