The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

The increasing number of people on the planet is the greatest threat to mankind's existence right now. In

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upward trend and illustrate why I disagree with

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statement. The

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of citizens

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mainly going up in developing countries and there are a few reasons for

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, there is

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of knowledge about contraception use, which leads to regular unprotected intercourse and eventually more offspring.

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,

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a major role in the desire to have more kids, as youngsters will help the family unit survive; by working.

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, a family consisting of four members will bring in less income, as compared to families with more members which will bring in more money

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the impact of

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child labour is an unfortunate development

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increasing

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individuals

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, I believe that

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is not the biggest problem for humanity. The main concern would be the lack of resources that can be used with more mouths to feed;

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, I am convinced that the main issue is

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of resources rather than availability.

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, patients are suffering from obesity in

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countries

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malnutrition is affecting under-developed nations.

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illustrates that excess goods can be given to

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poverty affected

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areas, but it is being consumed

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. In conclusion, the rising trend in the

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of humans on the planet is not a cause for concern because the environment can sustain us; but, there is

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distribution of useful material. Safe sex

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can reduce the

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people

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in

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and by implementing a robust aid program, having children will be a want and not a need for survival.