the diagram below shows how a refrigerator works.

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The chart describes how a refrigerator does its activity.

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this

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circular process starts with the assimilation of

heat

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from food inside the electronic device and ends with the

heat

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release into the atmosphere.

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with, the refrigerator absorbs meals'

heat

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in order to make it colder for the aliments conservation. After the assumption of hot air, the refrigerator pushes gas through a large tube with warm low-pressure gas.

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moves inside a compressor, designed as a polygon, and

then

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the air is subjected to a hot high-pressure gas. At

this

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point, all the warmth is transferred outside.

The next step is

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a condenser with cool high-pressure liquid made by three pipes interlacing, and, after that, the high-pressure liquid evaporates. The

last

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materials move in a capillary tube (a smaller one compared with the tube used in the first steps of the activity) and start the process again with new

heat

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given by the food.

linda.marchettoFri Jun 23 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words heat with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "moves" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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the diagram below shows how a refrigerator works.

In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that living in a country is an interesting experience while some think that living where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In many countries, government are investing in new technology to deal with public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government university?

Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.