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Some claim that studying abroad has greater benefits for a student's home country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Studying abroad becoming popular in our
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modern
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, some argue that studying abroad can
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 have significant benefits for the
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home
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country
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.Today, we will discuss both sides of
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 argument and offer my own perspective. On the one hand, studying abroad can benefit a
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home
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country
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 in several ways.
First,
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students who study abroad often return
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 with new ideas and perspectives, which can be valuable in fields
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 as business, science, and politics.
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students who study abroad often make valuable connections with people from other countries. These connections can lead to opportunities for trade, research collaborations, and cultural exchange, all of which can benefit a
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home
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.
On the other hand
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, there are
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against the idea that studying abroad benefits a
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home
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country
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. One of the main arguments is that many students who study abroad never return to their
home
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country
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, which means that the knowledge and experience they gained may not be
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 there. In conclusion,
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 studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages for a
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increase
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increase
 the positive impact of studying abroad
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 reducing its negative effects
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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