The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The illustration depicts the data for
radio
and TV
viewers in the United Kingdom from October until December 1992. The graph shows the correlation between the percentages of people in the UK that watch or view TV
or radio
from 1 AM until 11 PM. A brief examination shows that the radio
win happens during the day while
the TV
takes place at night.
The data starts at 1 AM when TV
have higher audiences by less than 5%. After midnight passed, the radio
listeners had a tremendous spike from below 5% to 25% within 1 hour. During this
time, radio
had its peak at 9 AM while
TV
viewers were only around 5%.
However
, after having their lowest numbers at 11 AM, TV
shows start to gain their audience and had their highest value at 9 PM with almost 45%. When this
occurs, the difference between TV
and Radio
is almost 40% with Radio
only having 5%.Submitted by nadiasyifaa on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, tv with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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