The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict some information about university sports fields in two distinct years respectively 1990 and the present. There are some changes during
this
period which have happened to specific courts namely basketball, tennis, pool
as well as
fitness. Starting with the same features during these years, it is obvious that except for Cafe and reception
area
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every other pitch has been changed completely.
In addition
, the green area at the left top of the map has been demolished completely and has been converted into the basketball court. In 1990, the existing pool is located outdoors
while
now it is under the roof with the exact size.
Whereas
at the left of the
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the park and car park are converted into a basketball and tennis court at present;
however
, the existing tennis pitch in 1990 has changed completely to the new fitness centre. There are some slight changes through these times which include changing rooms relocating and downsizing to the centre of the map. The location of the cafe and reception area are unchanged from 1990.
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