An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause ?

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is specialists in specific areas, leaving their own poorer countries. It is undeniable that professionals in specific fields,
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as doctors and teachers, has become an essential part of our life. In
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,essay I will look at solutions, and examine factors responsible for causes. One of the main causes of leaving their countries is of course low salaries. What I mean here is that maybe they are living in poverty-stricken countries, and they have unsustainable economies in the countryside, so governments cannot afford them high salaries. It is a result of low-skill workers in power structures because they cannot do their work well and have tough relationships with other states ,
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, they have not exchanged food or another type of stuff. The first cause mentioned above has led to in future they will not honour enough population to call themselves "country" or local folk will feel always miserable, cannot afford themselves to have a rest to other lands,
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as islands, and it has a big influence on the relationship between people and administrations. Another problem that follows is that, if in future they have natural disasters,
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as tsunamis, and earthquakes, nobody will help them and after these ,disasters they will have an unstable economy of acreage,
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some workers can lose opportunities to feed their families. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to the conclusion that non-skill workers in ministers are equal to low-standard-of-living folk. So it would not be surprising to see some misunderstanding between governments and locals related to their low salaries in the near future.
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