Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

Looking at the
task
below, which is concerning the difference in salaries between professionals and ordinary workers, it's evident the way in which 2 wide views, give the opportunity to evaluate and express a Proper idea about it.
To begin
with, the first view is related to the question that the
task
proposes, or rather: " What do you think of
this
trend?". The answers can be many, here it is why is dominant to considering the whole circumstances. One clear example is that, for those who have dedicated their life studying and researching, with the intention to become professionals
such
as doctors or lawyers, happy to be helpful in the future, the fear action that government could take for them is to propose a higher
salary
, as a thankful way for their effort. In comparison, there are those who are living a standard life, earning an ordinary
salary
, without being rewarded.
This
is happening, not because our society doesn't take them into consideration as the previous one, but because is fear that they get what they deserve. From my point of view, after having thought, compared and analysed all the pieces of information that the
task
reports, I admit to agree with the idea to sustain with a higher
salary
, who have worked hard for it, giving
instead
a regular recompense for those who haven't push that much in their past. To respond to the second question of the
task
, I suppose that, the only cases which deserve a strong
salary
, are the luckiness that the life has decided to be hard, giving to them an illness for the rest of their existence. In conclusion, with what has already been mentioned, it's crucial to highlight the importance of the study, yet through
this
, we can become professional person, which
deserve
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the best treatment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compensation
  • Expertise
  • Income disparity
  • Societal contribution
  • Automation
  • Scarcity
  • Market dynamics
  • Infrastructure
  • Professional ethics
  • Economic disparity
  • Undervalued
  • Meritocracy
  • Vocational skill
  • Job market
  • Wage gap
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