The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
The graph illustrates information about the value of
bananas
in four regions between 1994 and 2004.
To begin
with, the rate of bananas
is in US dollars per kilogram. It can be seen that in the year, 1996 the cost
of bananas
in Japan
and France was the highest (USD $2 per kilogram) as compared to Germany
and USA
being the lowest. In 1997, the cost
of bananas
in Germany
decreased from USD $1.5 per kg to about 1.20 whereas
it remained the same in the USA
.
In 1998, the value of the fruit in Japan
raised to USD $ 3 per kilogram in contrast
to other countries. Germany
and USA
are at $1.80 and $1.30 respectively. In 1999, there was a fall in the cost
of bananas
in all four countries. In 2000 the cost
of bananas
increased in Japan
and France significantly. In 2004, the value was highest for Japan
followed by France, Germany
and USA
.
It can be concluded that bananas
in Japan
are the most expensive in relation to other states. USA
being the cheapest.Submitted by A on
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