Some feel that animal testing is cruel while others feel it is necessity. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

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There is a split opinion where some believe conducting
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on
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is cruelty and some believe it is mandatory.
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, both have their own pros and cons.
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will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion Examining the primary point, thinkers who believe animal testing is cruel would put forward is
animals
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cannot speak and
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cannot express their feelings when
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are being conducted on them. For ,instance
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, for
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ages scientists have been conducting
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on
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as their DNA matches with
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, whether it be any medical
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or sending them to
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very first time. The cure for polio back in 1990 was tested on
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first and because of so back to back failures around 60 to 70
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died till the cure was found.
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there
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no strict laws being imposed for people who use
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to
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tests
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. In fact, in some countries governments themselves allow the use of
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for
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when a chimpanzee was sent by a very popular
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space
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to
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a test and to check if
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can survive a rocket ride to the
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and on top of that no measures were taken to bring the chimpanzee back.
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latter view, some believe animal
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are necessary before introducing the results or start giving cures
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medicines to
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humans
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. No human would sacrifice their life to
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a test on them,
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strong laws are
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imposed on conducting
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on
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, where someone could be hanged to death or they could be jailed for life if they
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tests
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on
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.
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,
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have a larger purpose to serve
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the
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society
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animals
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. For
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instance if people keep doing
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on
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and when they fail a person dies it could have served more than 1 purpose to
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society.
To conclude
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and to give my opinion, I would say that
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being conducted on
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first is a justified and more ideal approach,
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however
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there should
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be some restrictions on
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of
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by only some institutes and research departments. In a big picture sometimes
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type of test on
animals
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could save the human race.
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