You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved to? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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Royal Bank about the change of residential address on my account. The name on the file is Dinesh Annedi and the account number is 134567. I relocated to a new place about 4 weeks ago,

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. I would be grateful if you can update my current location to 376 Robbin Road, Kamloops, British Columbia, V2C1P9. I understand that all the in-mail communication within the past weeks was sent to the old house. I would like to make a request for my credit card bills and debit card usage statement from the

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4 weeks to be sent again to my new residence.

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, I was informed by my previous landlord that he will be returning all the old bank letters. I would appreciate it if you can either destroy these documents or send them to my new residence as I do not want my banking information to be left unattended. I hope my account information and the new address provided above are sufficient to update my file and reissue the old mail. In the event that you need additional information, please mail me and I shall promptly send the necessary documents. Yours Sincerely, Dinesh Annedi

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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