The internet provides us with info about life and cultures of different countries and some say it is not necessary to visit them to learn about them. Agree or disagree?
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the necessity
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apply
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the internet
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totally agree
this
above statement.
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to visit
different places as well as
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is getting
life
adventariest
and Correct your spelling
adventures
adventurist
give
them some change in their daily Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
life
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, It's imposible
to Correct your spelling
impossible
visit
each band every
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in every
counrty
in the world because Correct your spelling
country
world
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the world
visit
in their one life
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social work and jobs to do in their daily routine so they have to Correct your spelling
their
spent
time with them.Change the verb
spend
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Moreover
visit
in the
different countries and getting knowledge about that country and their culture is Correct article usage
apply
extreme
costly so they can not afford the financially.
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extremely
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apply
persontry
to Correct your spelling
person try
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each and every country they become tired and Wrong verb form
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However
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love
to visit
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feel the culture of different countries.so it is easy to search on the Correct your spelling
and
internet
about the different counry
and getting information is Correct your spelling
country
extreme
easy. In Change the adjective
extremely
edition
it is totally free they do not have to pay for Correct your spelling
addition
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.For instance
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their
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time Correct your spelling
leisure
people
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is easy for them. They can sit whenever and they become Correct your spelling
and
knowledgable
.
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knowledgeable
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technical era use of technology will on
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be on
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love
to use the internet
and they will getting
about knowledge of other countries and Change the verb form
get
be getting
this
will Add a missing verb
be eaasier
eaasier
way for them. so Correct your spelling
easier
i
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I
am totally agree
with Change the verb form
totally agree
this
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