The internet provides us with info about life and cultures of different countries and some say it is not necessary to visit them to learn about them. Agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era
internet
become
necessity
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of
life
.
Humankind's
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are
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dependent on the
internet
.
in
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In
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each and every small place
people
use
internet
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the internet
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for getting information and some other uses.So,
i
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am totally agree
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totally agree
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with
this
above statement. to commence with;
People
love
to
visit
different places
as well as
they
love
to try new things
this
is get
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their
life
adventariest
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adventures
adventurist
and
give
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gives
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them some change in their daily
life
.
Furthermore
, It's
imposible
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impossible
to
visit
each band
every
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in every
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counrty
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country
in the world because
world
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the world
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is too big.They can not
visit
in their one
life
.
For example
; They have
thair
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their
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social work and jobs to do in their daily routine so they have to
spent
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time with them.
Morever
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Moreover
,
visit
in
the
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different countries and getting knowledge about that country and their culture is
extreme
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costly so they can not afford the financially.
Secondly
,They do not have that much
of
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energy. If
persontry
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person try
to
covered
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each and every country they become tired and
some time
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get health
issue
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issues
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.
However
, Some
people
love
to
visit
nd
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and
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feel the culture of different countries.so it is easy to search on the
internet
about the different
counry
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country
and getting information is
extreme
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extremely
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easy. In
edition
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addition
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it is totally free they do not have to pay for
this
.
For instance
;In
the
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their
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lesure
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leisure
time
people
get some knowledge
nd
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and
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is easy for them. They can sit whenever and they become
knowledgable
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knowledgeable
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.
to sum up
, down the lane, in
this
technical era use of technology will
on
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the top.
People
love
to use the
internet
and they will
getting
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get
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about knowledge of other countries and
this
will
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be eaasier
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eaasier
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easier
way for them. so
i
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I
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am totally agree
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totally agree
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with
this
view.
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