The internet provides us with info about life and cultures of different countries and some say it is not necessary to visit them to learn about them. Agree or disagree?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The internet provides us with info about life and cultures of different countries and some say it is not necessary to visit them to learn about them. Agree or disagree?

Your opinion

Some people think advertisements control what we purchase, while others think they are useful sources of information on products. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that studying at university or collage is the best route to a successful career. While others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Road accidents have become one of the biggest causes of fatalities nowadays. What are the causes of such accidents? How can this problem be dealt with?

Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?