IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 4.5

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavent.

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavent.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The presented maps give
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
information about the development of an
island
Use synonyms
 after the facilities concerned with
travel
Correct article usage
the travel
show examples
 industry are constructed.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is clearly seen that the development of the accommodation, restaurant, pier, footpath and
vehicle
Use synonyms
track
Use synonyms
 contribute to the tourist facilities. The length of
Use synonyms
island
Add an article
the island
show examples
 is 100 meters. In that area, the accommodation is constructed and it is
also
Linking Words
 near the beach. The original
island
Use synonyms
 has a beach in the south area of the
island
Use synonyms
. After the construction, there is a swimming area by the beach. All are connected
with
Change preposition
by
show examples
footpath
Correct article usage
a footpath
show examples
. On the other side. there are
also
Linking Words
 accommodations with
footpath
Fix the agreement mistake
footpaths
show examples
. Between the two places of accommodation, the reception takes place in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
 which is surrounded by
Use synonyms
vehicle
Add an article
a vehicle
show examples
track
Use synonyms
. The restaurant is to the north of the reception along the
vehicle
Use synonyms
track
Use synonyms
. There is a pier with two boats located in the
southest
Correct your spelling
southeast
 end of
vehicle
Use synonyms
track
Use synonyms
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, vehicle, track with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: