The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided map illustrates the
town
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centre of Islip before and after the development.
Overall
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, it is evident that the Islip
town
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will be totally transformed from a rural area to an urbanized area as many buildings will be constructed for serving residents' desires.
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with, the most noticeable addition is that most facilities will be surrounded by a dual carriageway. It can be observed from the diagram that the countryside and shops above the main road at the north of the
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will be flattened, and
then
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replaced by many facilities including a bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing.
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, the main road and the shops at the centre of the
town
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remain but only pedestrians will be allowed to use the road. The new housing will be established at the southeast of Islip
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,
whereas
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the park will be cut down into around one-fourth of its original size.
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, school and housing outside the dual carriageway in the south of the
town
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are retained.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
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